That rough draft idea is sorta expired now, as new ideas have flowed through my head and the story has been updated. Now that the Pokemon Satoshin was the source of power instead of the door, I plan on changing that. I need to update the page.
Your note of "Later assisted by Mewtwo" is going to come into play, and Ash calling for his assistance is currently the catalyst that allows them to save the day. I hope that sufices for right now.
Bring back Pokémon Creation Contests. I would be glad to hold them if no one else will.
Similar to how BTFF has alien fests, we could have Pokémon fests. Two weeks to celebrate a Pokémon line. A vote for a Pokémon goes for the entire line. If someone voted for Kirlia and someone else for Gallade, that would count for the whole Ralts line. If the entire gimmick of a Pokémon is that they’re counterparts (Sawk/Throh, Durant/Heatmor, Seviper/Zangoose), they also share a fest and votes. The elemental monkeys also all share a fest, because none want to drudge though three fests of the same monkeys.
Sorry to butt in, but I really like these ideas! You should share these on the forums or the server discord if you’re on there, more people could look at these. I’m an admin also, so I could help maintain these since past wiki events usually just never got off the ground.
Haven’t been active in a while, but I want to be more active on the wiki. Read recent eps including Vs. Alder, and wow that was great! I figured Ian could maybe get to the Elite Four, but would lose on the second or third one, like Ben did in his series, so it was shocking when he managed to get to Alder and beat him! Really excited to see where PT goes from here on out, think I have an idea based off of the next title & the anime.
Alexa tagging along possibly, since she works for Lumiose Press and was a travel companion of Ash during the Decalore Islands. I think it’ll fit nicely with Ian now as champion, the press would definitely be interested in him.
Hey Primal! Good to hear from you! Had just thought of you recently. Yeah, it seems that Ian winning was a big surprise to a lot of people. But I felt it it was necessary and a great way to move forward. Yes, while I had this idea before the current anime series, it is very similar.
I love the idea of Alexa and the press following Ian around! They would drive him crazy! I went with a different approach, having an assistant that forces him to attend official events and attend meetings and do public speaking events.
That's a pretty interesting approach, I kinda like it. It reminds me a lot of the whole Pokemon League poitics in Pokemon Tales: Brendan, when he was almost banned and had to sit in that meeting. I wonder how Ian will do as champion since he's usually always moving forward, him running away being a big part of his origin and why he's usually quick to move on his feet, so being a champion of one region will be interesting to see. Guessing he might be a wandering champion, drifting town to town throughout the rest of Plasma.
I've been thiniking of restarting Pokemon Chronicles since I feel like each attempt has been messy and really ill-planned, so I was wondering if you'd like to help just planning stuff out (I'd still plan & do all of the writing, dw)? You're probably busy with PT, so I get it if you don't or are unable to.
Hello Dioga! It's me again, for another round of this stuff! I'm planning to overhaul the two shows I'm working on (Dawn to Dusk and Pokémon Insanity), but I need a small bit of help on Dawn to Dusk. I know Dawn to Dusk will be about the two twins going through the Sinnoh Region, getting 2 badges for each season (Each season is about 15 episodes long, planning to do 4 with the 4th having 30). What should I do in order to add onto the plot? Have less or more episodes (Less Episodes = Less Filler), add in an Evil Team, or something completly different?
Some Ideas I have is that the show's plot will go a bit like the original plot, where Dawn and Dusk want to go on their Pokemon Journey, but their parents are trying to prevent them because they want them do to coustume contests instead. Another idea is that after they get their badges and (might or might not) beat the Pokemon Leauge, they have to take care of something in other Regions like Fiore, Almia, the Battle Frontier (Yes I know that's a part of Sinnoh), or a completely different region! I'd also like to add in Episodes instead focusing on Lucas and Barry's journey as well.
Anyways, what shall I do about this? I'd like to add in a bit of creativity into this show. Also, I might actually do YABTGSC, but only as a one-off special. What do you think of this?
Glad to hear you are back. I had to take some time to think your questions over. To add onto the plot, I like your statement about having episodes on Lucas and Barry. I know originally you had stated you'd want one episode per town and one episode per route traveled. Some routes are longer than others and you could expand them out to fill it if desired. If you do both gym battles and contests it makes it longer as well.
To add more plot to it, a secondary storyline would be good. It could either compliment your main story line (example, contests, gyms, etc.) or be against them. If they ran away from home to pursue their dreams, maybe have security guards or bounty hunters searching for them, and having to avoid them causes awkward situations depending where they are.
YABTGSC could be really good as a long movie. Start with them separate or one just moving in, have drama of the two girls trying to get Gold's attention and eventually build to your ending.
Hope some of these ideas help you out. If you have any other questions just ask!
Thanks for the answers! This will help me, but be noted that my way of thinking my shows has changed a lot. For an example, I have a completely new design for Dusk, and I decided to have the two become Pokemon Trainers instead of Pokemon Coordinaters.
I listed all of the Episodes for Season 1. Look in Dawn to Dusk: Episodes for more info. Some ideas I have is that Dawn and Dusk might get distracted from their Journies, and instead do something else. (Like for an example, Dawn and Dusk deciding to sign up for the Jublife TV Station. Or maybe them deciding to get a brand new ride?)
Obstacles would be interesting, too. Like Floaroma Town having too many Flowers for Dawn and Dusk to go through due to their allergies, or Team Galactic getting in the way of their journey, perhaps even an annoying Pokemon messing up with them.
Also, I should note that I don't have DPPT, so the story may not be 100% accurate. That might be okay, because it could breed creativity. Also, I'll have the plot try and go through the likes of Diamond and Pearl, even though I don't know much about the game. Maybe for now you can give me more ideas! The YABTGSC Movie is a unique idea, but I was expecting to make it a half-hour special, not a feature-length flim. I will also note that Pokemon Insanity is going to have a very different plot.
Maybe something in Pokemon Insanity, by the way, is that I'm gonna mention fan-made regions in the show. Do I have to make a page for each of them, or just for the Insanity Islands and have the mentions just be in the episode scripts? Two regions I'll probably mention in the show is Kuwan and Joryo. (Two regions based off of the rest of Shikoku and the American Parts of Cascadia respectivley)
One more thing I shall mention: DtD, YAB, and PI will all be in the same timeline. With PI (O32) going first, DTD going second, with YABTGSC happening sometime during DTD, and then PI (New) being the last in the timeline. And yes, I did mention PI twice, more on that later.
Anyways, that was a lot of info. I hope you can help me on this, please! :D
Hello, sorry for the wait and all of that. I just got some creative ideas for Dawn to Dusk, and I decided to tweak some of the character's personalities on the main page. I decided to also change the plot for the first episode. What do you think about the first part of Twilight Startings? Also, if you want to take a look at the main page, then look at Dawn to Dusk.
I'd like to see your reaction to what I did. I might try to do Dawn to Dusk first, might add in YAB while working on it, and finally redo Pokémon Insanity. Or I could do something else, you never know. I decided to make Dawn to Dusk 75 episodes long, with Seasons 1-3 being 15 episodes long. Season 4 has the remaining 30 episodes, and I plan for Dawn and Dusk to earn 2 badges per season. By the way, do you have any more ideas to make the show more creative? I enjoy your help with me.
One more thing I should mention is that I'm currently trying to create some pixel art of Dusk. The way I might do this is by combining the two sprites of Dawn and Lucas (More specifically for Dawn's Hat and Lucas' Body), and redesigning it to the look I currently have for Dusk. I'll send you an image when I'm done with it.
Yeah. I should make a script instead. Thank you for the criticism, after all, critical reviews make things better. I now understand that writing a script is more helpful than a story. Thank you for this information!
Much better! I'm able to understand what is going off, and identify their characteristics a lot more!
I don't have any plot ideas without knowing what you want. If you give me what you are thinking, I can give you my opinions and provide new ideas from there. But it is your series so I want the main ideas to come from you. Once you start I'll support as much as I can
Well, I've wanted to make the show's plot and such just stand out from the others is all. I mean, I just don't want Dawn to Dusk be an average Pokemon Journey show! I'd like to show some flavor into it! I just need your help in order to give me some ideas to make it more creative! It's actually one of the reasons why I've been asking you once again. Anyway, you still haven't talk about the designs I've made. I'd like to hear about that as well! :D
Sorry for not responding sooner. I wasn't in a headspace to consider what you needed.
I think if you want the series to stand out, you have to highlight your main feature which is the twins. Base events for the series on the fact that they are similar yet different. Start them out with a similar goal then one of them changes. Dusk seems to be the more reserved one so him expressing he wants to do his own thing could cause tension between the two. They split, traveling with either Lucas or Barry before eventually accepting each other's ways.
For Team Galactic, my idea is for Cyrus (or another member) have a twin as well. Being polar opposite so one is good and one is evil. Dusk and Dawn both relate to one of them and join them. So one of them would become evil until their sibling gets them to see sense.
Another idea is a paired challenge; so two trainers need to be there to participate (in gym battles, contests, etc) so when one wants to do something different, it can cause the conflict of why the other one won't listen.
From your first episode it's easy to tell their characteristics and that they like the same stuff. To make it awesome that relationship needs to grow and change along the way.
Those are my ideas anyway. Use them as you will and feel free to ask more questions. Try and make questions specific if you can cause this is all just a shot in the dark if it's what you're looking for or not.
Great ideas! Perhaps I could have Dusk do his journey in a different way, with Dawn trying to do the same thing, but it doesn't work for Dawn and she just does it the original way she was doing her journey, with the two possibly having problems with that.
Also, I already have Dawn and Dusk's Pokemon Planned. This will be their team by the end of Season 1.
Dawn, as of Season 1.
Dusk, as of Season 1. (Using placeholder character for now.)
...And I'm planning for Team Galactic to be Lucas's and Barry's problem mainly. Sure, they could interfier with Dawn and Dusk, but Team Galactic would possibly truly shine during the Lucas and Barry episodes.
The Paired Challenge is an excellent idea! Only one problem: Who should be paired with the Other Gym Leader? Perhaps for Roark it could be a Miner or the Underground Man, and for Gardenia it could be one of her Students or something.
And I should also mention that Dawn and Dusk might care for each other a lot. Basically, what I'm trying to say is 'If you hit my Twin, then I'll break your chin.' Maybe the two could care for each other so much that it leads to problems with them. Like being over protective of the other twin or the two not wanting to go separate paths. What do you think of this idea?
For the paired challenge, you could make unique characters to team up with gym leaders, use a gym trainer like your idea, or even pair gym leaders together with each other. Another idea is if you're familiar with the anime pick characters of the day or other rivals from their that can pair up with them.
I like your idea with Dawn and Dusk caring for each other too much that it causes problems.
Should I add anything to the YABTGSC special? Let me know! :D
Oh, and by this little peice of text, I'm just wondering on how can I convert this story into a 30-minute special. I mean sure, I'd say it's good enough for 15-minutes, but even then, that's kinda streching it. What do you think I could add to the story? Thanks for saying it's good, by the way!
So for YABTGSC, if you want to make it longer, you've gotta fill in some time. You have several time passes. Months, a year, two years. Put in activities that they do together that make Lyra fall more in love with one of them or both of them. A time they go exploring together. Lyra and Kris get their nails done. They hang out in the city with Ethan and Kris up front and Lyra shy in the back. Have another person flirt with any of them to make it uncomfortable and have the others help them out.
Another idea to make it longer is to provide viewpoints from all 3 characters. Or the same events from their different views. Perhaps Ethan prefers one but not the other. Maybe some drama could be Ethan actually having to take time to consider being in a 3-person relationship. Maybe Kris is completely uncomfortable about the idea at first and she and Lyra have a heart-to-heart while Ethan thinks about it.
You have an interesting concept and overall story. Now it just needs content. Details, feelings, events, conflict. That will help make it longer and build that love story you're going for.
Hope that helps! Also, enjoyed the end of Twilight Startings! The battle in the house was hysterical and their mom interrupting made it better. I love those unconventional battles.
Started on Second Episode. It's gonna be shorter than the first I bet, but the first part is now up. Look in Friends and Rivals if you want. (And yes, I put Professor Rowan as the father of Lucas. I just thought it would mix up the plot a little.)
Oh, neat! Now, while Dawn to Dusk is just starting to grow it's roots, perhaps the show making an appearance in the crossover would be neat. I honestly prefer either majorish or minor for them, but Dawn and Dusk can take a roll in the story.
Also, just curious: but how long should I make my scripts? Try to make them 20 minutes long, or just make them short in order to be able to produce them faster? One of the reasons why it took a while for Twilight Startings to be finished is because of how long it's script is. (and School, and Slacking...)
What do you personally do for scripts? I might look at some of your scripts to catch a drift on how I'll be able to make my scripts quickly and effiecently. (And you probably have noticed that I started on YABTGSC as well. It'll be quick, because it's just one episode, one script, no character pages.)
Also, I'm having a problem with making the script of the second episode. I'm just wondering how I can encourage Dawn and Dusk to do a Pokemon Journey, with Lucas and Barry doing so. Currently, I'm having Lucas and Barry tell the two that winning the 8 badges will give them a 1,000,000 Pokedollar Prize, encouraging them to get the cash. What else could I do to encourage the two?
(I want to hear the plot of this site-wide crossover as well. Just wondering what it's about.)
EDIT: I've decided for Dawn and Dusk to use the money to help their family. What do you think of this idea? But I also want to still hear your ideas as well!
What I personally do with my scripts is not by time, but by page length. My standard, non-battle focused episodes are usually 6 pages long. That is my minimum length for an episode. Episodes that are battle heavy, like gym battles or league tournaments, are usually 10-12 pages. My earlier episodes are more like 6 pages then as I got better as a writer I could hit longer episodes with ease. I also have a general idea of what should happen in mind then fill it in with dialogue to fill the script.
Dawn and Dusk could use the money for future goals. Whether they want to be professional trainers, wanna go to college. Supporting their family is a great goal, but maybe one of them gets a different idea of what they want to use it for later on.
As for the site-wide crossover, I have a few more people I want to confirm are onboard, then I'll get everything rolling with details.
Hey! So for Dawn and Dusk's teams. In your trainer cards above you listed Dawn as getting a Roselia and Dusk getting an Aipom. Can I go ahead and add those Pokemon to their parties for the crossover? It'll just give them versatility and I want all the trainers to have at least two Pokemon.
Now, what is going to be the 'in-universe' date of this crossover? Dawn and Dusk is expected to end around January 2021 (Season 4 was made years after the first 3), so I'd like to know about this. If you want their Season 3 team, here it is:
The reason why I'm asking this is because of my plotted 'in-universe' dates for Dawn to Dusk. Season 1 occurs from Fall 2008 - Spring 2009, Season 2 occurs from Summer 2009 - Winter 2010, Season 3 occurs from Summer 2010 - Winter 2011, and Season 4 occurs from Winter 2019 - Winter 2021. And by 'in-universe', I don't mean that's when the show itself takes place, I'm taking about in-universe as in an alternate universe where this show actually exists and people are placing down info about the show they love to watch. That's what I'm asking, specifically. When does this crossover's 'in-universe' show takes place in?
I honestly have no timeline set cause I don't abide to that in my series. For your series, let's say during that first season so fall or winter 2008. Especially since that's where your airing episodes are right now.
Hello! I’m new to this wiki and I really like it here. Anyways, I have a question. Is there any way I can become a content mod? I have been one before on the Roblox Creepypasta Wiki and I would also like to help the wiki by deleting low quality pages. Now this wiki has outstanding page quality which is nice, but I’d just remove pages here and there if they’re low quality.
As much as we'd love to have you as part of the team, you're still new to the wiki. Our team of admins and moderators has been established for almost five years now, with all pf us having a year's worth of experience beforehand. Give it a few months, and we (as a team) will consider promoting you. In the mean time, please avoid editing other user's pages. Even if they are inactive, it is still their technical intellectual property. However, it is strongly encouraged for you to create and edit pages of your own! I have high expectations for what you can bring to this wiki.
I would discontinue my Max series which I don't think I'm gonna use it for years and replace all of my series about myself but I'm not sure about my own series about myself in here. If there's a cross over then I'm replacing it with my character which is myself as Pokemon Trainer. Are there ways where I would discontinue my series?
Edit: Don't get me wrong, I love Max but as much as I like him, I feel like I'm best at role playing myself. That's all.
Edit 2: Can you delete my series: Pokemon - The Journey of Max and all of it that you could for me? Because I don't think I would come back here and I don't think I'll be active here anymore (plus, It will take a long time for me to delete multiple of my series at once).
Dioga beta wrote: Yeah I can delete your items if you want. Hate to see you go.
Please do it for me. I might come back here just for visit but I don't know so it depends. And please let everyone who is looking forward to my series about Max know where I am discontinuing that series. Max is my favorite Pokemon character but I feel like I am rarely active here anymore. Thank you very much. :)